be beneficial to get benefits from(pose threats to) have/pose positive(negative) influences on be benefited from (be harmful/ detrimental to / be threaten by)
在乎
v.
pay attention to/ give priority to/ focus on/ concentrate on
被认为做某事
should do sth/ be supposed to do sth
有可能做某事
be likely to do sth
逻辑连接
审题
第一步看题型:最后一句
议论文的题型(85%):一个问题,包括同意与否、两方讨论、优缺对比、好或坏
报告文的题型(15%):两个问题,包括原因+解决、任意两个问题
第二步看题目内容:
确定主题:概括重点讨论的话题——题目的主语/宾语/目的
看准内容:一件事情/两者对比
找到限定词:比较级 绝对词 范围
开头段
议论文开头段(适用于同意与否、两方讨论、优缺对比、好或坏):
50字以内 6分钟以内
背景句:概括——抽象+学术:一个内容用主题、两个内容提取共性
改写句:主被动互换、换词(常换名词/动词)、两个内容合二为一(题目有对比)
观点句:具体的观点增加TR扣题+原因(预告)
同意题干:“某人应该做某事”“某物对某人有益处”
反驳题干:“某人不该做某事”“某物对某人有害处
样例:Currently, citizens are disputing the issue of who/what/how宾语从句/名词词组. 提取两个观点的共同点概括成名词 Some maintain thatinstead of doing sth, sb should do sth. 一件事情主被动互换句式/两者对比 In my submission, 具体观点+预告(具体/抽象)
2025.2.15同意与否
The best way to protect the environment is to use local resource, such as food or building materials rather than transporting resources from other places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Currently, citizens are disputing the issue of 如何保护环境考虑到资源的使用. Some maintain that instead of 运送各种材料从其他地区, 市民应该高效利用本地的食物和建筑材料为了生态系统。 In my submission, 使用当地的资源有益于环境,考虑到节约和循环。
背景句:Currently, citizens are disputing the issue of 用宾语从句how to preserve(替换protect) nature considering the usage of resources(总结词to use of local resource改为名词短语the usage of resources). 也可用一个名词总结 the issue of preserving environment.
改写句:Some maintain that instead of 动名词 + 不定式作状语,主谓宾 delivering various materials from other regions, citizens should efficiently exploit local food and constructing materials for the ecosystem.
观点句:In my submission(依我之见), utilizing native resources is beneficial to the environment in terms of conservation and recycling.动名词短语作主语 + 系 + 表 + 介词短语作方式状语,用来明确 “beneficial”(有益的)这个性质所指向的对象 + 介词短语作方面状语,用来限定 “益处” 的具体领域
观点句
内容:
宾语从句: 题目讨论和人相关的事情 Currently, citizens are disputing the issue of who can do sth 题目讨论和影响、原因相关 Currently, citizens are disputing the issue of what are influences/reasons of sth 题目讨论的是动作/方式 Currently, citizens are disputing the issue of how to do sth
Some people think rapid population growth in cities only benefits people who live there while others believe that there are disadvantages. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Currently, citizens are disputing the issue of what are influences of urbanization. Some maintain that instead of posing positive effects to local citizens, this migration trend will bring drawbacks for diverse aspects. In my submission, for various fields, this change will display both beneficial and detrimental/various impacts for the society and individuals.(中立)
Some people think that a high salary is the most important factor when choosing a job. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Currently, citizens are disputing the issue about what are the influences of satisfying income for vocational planning. Some maintain that instead of posing 产生(影响、结果等) positive effects to job applicants, high salary will bring more drawbacks for diverse aspects.(原来的说法:there will be more benefits than drawbacks for job applicants. ) In my submission, the consideration of salary will be beneficial to individuals such as promoting their ambition and saving their time for career development.
观点:优点多
优点——满足生活需求 上进心 动力 减少找工作的时间成本
缺点——累 业绩 过度劳动的疾病 工作态度和认真不到位
2025.4.19好或坏——抽象+柔和对比
In many parts of the world, children are given more freedom than in the past. Is this a positive or negative development?
Currently, citizens are disputing the issue of what are the influences of 孩子的自由选择. Some maintain that whether 给孩子更多自由相比于过去 pose positive influence on 年轻一代needs to be discussed. In my submission, 更多的自由will be beneficial to年轻人such as 独立的培养和被尊重.In my submission, more freedom will be beneficial to young people, such as fostering their independence and enabling them to be respected.
The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Currently, the public are discussing the topic of 公共媒体的内容。Some people think that 令人愉快的报道应该被宣传/被包含在不同的媒体中。In my perspective, 公众应该多接触积极的故事在日常生活中,尤其是更多的福利为了居民。
Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private healthcare outweigh the disadvantages?
Currently, the public are discussing about what are the influences of private medical services. Some matin that instead of posing positive effects to employees, charging medical service will bring more drawbacks for various aspects. (there will be more benefits than drawbacks for patients) In my submission, private healthcarewill be beneficial to people such as efficient treatment and high-quality service.
私人医疗服务的缺点:贵 支付不起; 小城镇没有私人医疗; 黑诊所不靠谱; 医美资质不合格
主体段(议论文和报告文)
主体段可能的结构:150字
中心句+解释句+两个短例子(+总结句)
中心句+两个长例子(+总结句)
中心句+三个短例子(+总结句)
主体段可能的结构:100字
中心句+解释句+一个例子(+总结句)
中心句+两个短例子(+总结句)
主体段可能的结构:50字
中心句+解释句(+总结句)
中心句+1个短例子(+总结句)
赞同一方写法
主1:大段150字
中心句(20字):重复题目+预告两个例子的角度(展开分论点) For starters, sth will be beneficial/detrimental to … in terms of A and B
只有功能,没有意义
要用同义词、近义词替换
扣题
解释句(20字) – 抽象 Initially, it is evident that 原因+影响(我觉得可以换一个顺序)+第一个例子(70字) Besides, when……原因+影响+第二个例子(70字) (Generally, sb should do sth……, while this trend also implies potential threat to …..)
原因:
影响:
例子:
例子要深度不要广度,没个例子4行
例子要扣题——做一遍题目的事情——前2行
例子里写影响/原因——后2行
总结句:改写中心句,总结句:改写中心句 Generally=In general=Generally speaking=All in all=Overall 可以引出下一段的内容 大小段中间可以写连接句
主2:小段50字
中心句+解释句(原因) By contrast, sb/sth ……….
解释句:影响 Besides, …….
主1:100字,主2:100字 如何赞同(反驳)一个观点? 原因+结果+举例子 原因+结果+举例子
如果题目是绝对级则要强烈对比,否则柔和对比
解释句和举例子无法区分?
原因+好处/坏处——抽象
例子——泛指的主语做上面的具体事情
连词
主体段的段首必须有逻辑连接词的标志
结尾段
改写开头段的观点句+预告(+简单概括主体) In conclusion,sb/sth should …….
In conclusion/In summary/All in all/Overall/Above all/In a nutshell/To conclude/To sum up
一个真题
题目 :It is impossible to help all people around the world in need, so governments should focus on helping people in their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Currently, citizens are disputing the issue of governmental charitable projects. Some maintain that instead of providing assistance to developing countries worldwide, authorities should give priority to native citizens. In my submission, public fund should be invested in ensuring the well-being of domestic residents out of government’s obligation(公共资金应出于政府的责任被用于保障本国居民的福祉)
主体段1:150政府帮助本国人
For starters, authorities, especially for developing countries, should make efforts for their native residents in that people will besatisfied with their community and they can improve social equality.
中心句:重复题干+解释句:影响(好处)
It is widely accepted that public budget should be invested in infrastructure including medical service, educational resources and public welfare, which all consume a tremendous amount of funding. All these expenditures are contained within governmental daily operation, which are indispensable for the well-being of citizens domestically. 人们普遍认为,公共预算应投入于基础设施建设,包括医疗服务、教育资源和公共福利,这些项目无一不需要大量资金。所有这些支出都属于政府的日常运作范畴,是保障本国公民福祉所不可或缺的。
解释句:预告三个例子+原因
With advanced medical system related to public healthcare, medical facilities and professional doctors and nurses, local people will enjoy satisfying physical condition to make further contribution to their society. 借助涵盖公共医疗、医疗设施及专业医护人员的先进医疗体系,当地居民将享有良好的健康状况,从而能够进一步为社会作出贡献。
Moreover, when adequate educational resources are provided for the public, talented people will be cultivated to develop their own countries. 此外,当公众能够获得充分的教育资源时,社会将培养出更多人才,从而推动国家的发展。
There is no doubt that for disadvantaged people who suffer from poverty, governments can distribute various resources to promote their basic living standard including necessary shelter and average living expenses.
三个例子:医疗+教育+福利
Generally, there are a variety of aspects for local governments to invest in for domestic people, which indicates that for underdeveloped countries, they are unlikely to distribute extra resources for other countries.
总结句:改写中心句+引出下一段
本段结构:中心句+解释句+三个例子+总结句
主体段2:50政府不帮助别国的人
By contrast, when local governments possess limited resources in terms of financial reserves and lack of natural raw materials, they are highly unlikely to provide assistance to other countries in need.
中心句:重复题目+原因
If they insist on helping others, domestic resentment will be aroused. Not all the countries are developed sufficiently to fully take care of every citizen, which means there will be nations which endure domestic challenges like hunger, wars and unemployment.
解释句:影响——对人民的坏处
All in all, government leaders need to prioritize the well-being of their own residents.
总结句
In conclusion, governments should give priority to their native citizens and distribute public fund in various aspects to facilitate public daily life.
2025.5.17同意与否:The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Currently, the public are discussing the topic of 公共媒体的内容。Some people think that 令人愉快的报道应该被宣传/被包含在不同的媒体中。In my perspective, 公众应该多接触积极的故事在日常生活中,尤其是更多的福利为了居民。
Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of old houses in the local areas. Others think that people should have the freedom to build houses of their own style. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Currently, citizens are disbuting disputing the issue of what is the most appropriate design plan for new facilities. Some argue that instead of sticking to the original traditional style, Authorities should empower the right to citizenscitizens with the right to choose the design plan that best suits them. In my view, new buildings should take into account local government regulations and the specific needs of citizens, while striking a balance between the two.
On one hand, Sticking to the traditional fashion of architecture is beneficial to local tourism.This is because traditional styles embody unique cultural features, which endow the buildings with a high degree of recognizability.Therefore, tourists from other regions or foreign countries will find such a place extremely impressive when they come to visit. For example, Beijing still remains a number of ancient bungalows, which have been restored every year to keep its original appearance.There’s a large number of tourists pick Beijing for their holidays destination to see various old-fashioned buildings, like imperial palaces and alleys.
观点2 自由风格 因:满足人们的个性需求 果:提高生活质量
On the other hand, since the personal requirement of better quality of life is also undeniable, giving a certain degree of permission of private building style should be acceptable for administration.authorities should accept a certain degree of flexibility in private building designs so that this can promote citizens’ quality of life.Only Brand customized and Self – designed house can best suit for cater to individual people’s personal circumstance.For instance, People who smoke regularly have the need for a place where they can enjoy breath fresh air without disturbing others and not disrupt others due to the frog that generate by the cigarette.As a result, It’s necessary for smoker to have a balcony in the building their home , while yet most of old building can’t find lack even a single outdoor area for this purpose
To sum up, balancing traditional preservation and personal design freedom ensures both cultural heritage and quality living.
2025.7.5 两方讨论 – 互相对立 – 科技
Some people think technology mostly benefits our lives, while others believe it brings more disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Currently, citizens are disputing the issue of what are influences of technological development for public daily life.Some maintain that instead of relaying excessively on the outcome of high-technology, the public should be aware of the benefits it generates. In my submission, individuals should regard all the effects from various sections of technology rationally.
Currently, citizens are disputing the issue of what are the influencesof sth. Some maintain that instead of posing positive effect to sth, XX will bring more drawbacks for diverse aspects.In my submission, sb/sth will bebeneficial/detrimental to sb/sth+such as+预告.
优缺对比:题目内容已经定好,找优点和缺点就行哪个找的多,就多写 do the advantages outweigh thedisadvantages? 两个优点150+一个缺点50。 两个缺点150+一个优点50
例题
In many places, people’s lifestyles are changing rapidly, and this affects family relationships. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
好或坏is it positive or negative? 100优点+100优点 100缺点+100缺点
例题
Organized tours to remote places and communities are increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for local people and the local environment?
Currently, the public are discussing about what are the influences of group travel. Some maintains that instead of posing positive effect to the local circumstance. designed trip will bring more drawbacks for diverse aspects.In my submission, group trip is beneficial to its destination wherever it is, for example Boosting local economy and Preserve local culture.
In some countries, the number of people visiting art galleries is reducing. What are the reasons for this? How can we solve this problem?
报告文的开头段:改写+预告问题的答案
Currently, there is a common social issue that对画展感兴趣的居民越来越少, which is caused by忙碌的日程表 and 不常见的/令人费解的艺术主题。Therefore, 合理的场地安排和多元化的大众作品 can be used to address 减少的兴趣为了画展。
原因:票价贵,抽象主题 解决:降低票价大众的主题
例题2
An increasing number of developing countries are expanding their tourist industry. Why is this the case? Do you think it is a positive development?
原因:旅游业好发展,科技实力不够好不好:坏处——打扰生活 起冲突 破坏环境
Currently, there is a common social issue that 旅游业是很多发展中国家的重心在日常运营中, which is caused by 可以接受的投资 and 高效的收入。Therefore, 这种趋势 can be beneficial to 促进当地知名度和增加就业机会。
High-level computer skills are a necessary and important factor leading to a successful career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?这个题目也是,反驳不能跑题,不能说因为还需要其他技能