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雅思写作:1小时

  • 雅思大作文Task 2:议论文+报告文 250字 40分钟写到第二页的中间 上下浮动
  • 雅思小作文Task 1:6种图形 150字 20分钟写作第二页的2-3行
  • 字数只多不少 字数必须写够

大作文

注意事项

每段顶格写+段落之间空一行
不写主观的内容
可数名词用复数形式 表示泛指
Computers play an essential role in modern education.
→ 泛指“电脑”这一类设备,而不是某几台。

Students should be encouraged to develop critical thinking.
→ 泛指所有学生,而非某几个。

Cars cause a significant amount of air pollution in cities.
→ 泛指汽车这一类交通工具。

Books are a valuable source of knowledge.
→ 泛指书籍,而非特定几本。

Teachers have a great influence on children’s development.
→ 泛指教师这个群体。
Computer is important in education.
✔ 应该是:Computers are important in education.

人称替换&同义替换

使用第三人称“他们 大众 市民 居民 年轻人 学生”替换第一人称“我 我们”第二人称“你 你们”
表达同一的概念,需要换词:

词义词性同义词
人们n.people/the public/individuals/citizens/residents
年轻人n.the young/juvenile/youth/younger generations
老年人n.the old/the elderly /senior citizens/the aged
员工n.workers/ employees/ staff/ clerks
竞争对手n.rival/ competitor/ opponent/adveresory对手/ adversory contender敌对的竞争者
特点,特征n.trait(人的特征) /feature /attribute(v. 归因于) / characteristic(adj. 典型的、特有的)-r人物都可 / quality
结果,后果n.outcome/ result/ consequence
缺乏,缺少n.lack/ shortage/ insuffciency
标准,基准n.benchmark/ standard/ criteria
大量的adj.al lot of/ substantial/ plenty of/ enormous amount of
可行的
可操作的
adj.practical切实可行的 / feasible/ workable
重要的adj.important/ essential/ crucial/ critical/ key/ pivotal(pivot 中心点、最重要的人、中心)
产生,造成v.produce(生产,导致)/ generate/ create/triggar/ pose(to create a threat problom)
engender(to make a feeling or situation exist)
解决,处理v.solve/resolve/settle/tackle/handle/deal with/cope with/address
使用,利用v.use/ utilise/employ/exploit/harness
支持,资助v.support/sponsor/back up/subsidise/finance
提高,推动
加强
v.improve/promote/enhance/strengthen/facilitate/boost
改变,转变v.change/shift/alter/transform/convert
重视,强调
-观点句
v.prioritize/ highlight/emphasize/underline/underscore/pay\draw attention to
忽视,轻视v.ignore/neglect/overlook/underestimate
认为
-观点句
v.think=believe=claim=deem=hold the opinion that=argue=suppose=suggest=support=advocate=maintain
观点
-观点句
n.idea=view=point=opinion=viewpoint=submission=perspective=conviction
积极消极影响
-观点句
be beneficial to
get benefits from(pose threats to)
have/pose positive(negative) influences on
be benefited from (be harmful/ detrimental to / be threaten by)
在乎v.pay attention to/ give priority to/ focus on/ concentrate on
被认为做某事should do sth/ be supposed to do sth
有可能做某事be likely to do sth

高级替换

circumanstance 情况 替换 situation = condition,此外circumanstance 也可翻译为”环境”“氛围”
It is difficult to stay focused in noisy circumstances.→ 在嘈杂的氛围中很难集中注意力。
alternatives 方法 替换 method=way=means=approach
compulsory 强制性的 必修的

逻辑

积累易错词

单词词性中文意思用法/例句
advertising不可数名词广告业;广告活动(泛指)Advertising influences consumer behavior.
advertise动词做广告;宣传Companies advertise their products on social media.
advertisement可数名词一则广告(具体的广告内容)I saw an interesting advertisement on YouTube.

审题

第一步看题型:最后一句

  • 议论文的题型(85%):一个问题,包括同意与否、两方讨论、优缺对比、好或坏
  • 报告文的题型(15%):两个问题,包括原因+解决、任意两个问题

第二步看题目内容:

  • 确定主题:概括重点讨论的话题——题目的主语/宾语/目的
  • 看准内容:一件事情/两者对比
  • 找到限定词:比较级 绝对词 范围

四段式:

  • 开头段40字
  • 主体段有两段 200字(100+100/150+50)
  • 结尾段20字(以上字数建议是最低要求)

开头段

议论文开头段(适用于同意与否、两方讨论、优缺对比、好或坏):

  • 50字以内 6分钟以内
  • 背景句:概括——抽象+学术:一个内容用主题、两个内容提取共性
  • 改写句:主被动互换换词(常换名词/动词)、两个内容合二为一(题目有对比)
  • 观点句:具体的观点增加TR扣题+原因(预告)
    • 同意题干:“某人应该做某事”“某物对某人有益处”
    • 反驳题干:“某人不该做某事”“某物对某人有害处

样例:Currently, citizens are disputing the issue of who/what/how宾语从句/名词词组.
Some maintain that 一件事情主被动互换句式/两者对比instead of doing sth, sb should do sth.
In my submission, 具体观点+预告(具体/抽象)

同意与否的题目,要把开头段的观点句说具体,不要写“我同意、我不同意”,可能会忘记遗漏题目内容

真题:

2025.2.15同意与否

The best way to protect the environment is to use local resource, such as food or building materials rather than transporting resources from other places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Currently, citizens are disputing the issue of 如何保护环境考虑到资源的使用. Some maintain that instead of 运送各种材料从其他地区, 市民应该高效利用本地的食物和建筑材料为了生态系统。 In my submission, 使用当地的资源有益于环境,考虑到节约和循环。

背景句:Currently, citizens are disputing the issue of (用宾语从句)how to preserve(替换protect) nature considering the usage of resources(总结词to use of local resource改为名词短语the usage of resources). 改写句:Some maintain that instead of delivering various materials from other regions, citizens should efficiently exploit local food and constructing materials for the ecosystem.
观点句:In my submission, utilizing native resources is beneficial to the environment in terms of conservation and recycling.

观点句

内容:

宾语从句:
题目讨论和人相关的事情
Currently, citizens are disputing the issue of who can do sth
题目讨论和影响、原因相关
Currently, citizens are disputing the issue of what are influences/reasons of sth
题目讨论的是动作/方式
Currently, citizens are disputing the issue of how to do sth

主体段

赞同一方写法


主1:大段150字,

中心句(20字):重复题目+预告两个例子的角度(展开分论点)
For starters, sth will be beneficial/detrimental to … in terms of A and B

解释句(20字)—抽象 字数不多
——原因 20字(80%都能想出来)——万事皆有因
——影响 20字(结果——好处、坏处)——百因必有果

Initially, it is evident that 原因+影响+例子(70字)

Besides, when……原因+影响+例子(70字)

总结句:重复中心句+引出下一段
(Generally, sb should do sth……, while this trend also implies potential threat to …..)

主2:小段50字

中心句+解释句(原因)
By contrast, sb/sth ……….

解释句:影响
Besides, …….

主1:100字,主2:100字
如何赞同(反驳)一个观点?
原因+结果+举例子
原因+结果+举例子

如果题目是绝对级则要强烈对比,否则柔和对比

解释句和举例子无法区分?

  • 原因+好处/坏处——抽象
  • 例子——泛指的主语做上面的具体事情

结尾段

改写开头段的观点句+预告(+简单概括主体)
In conclusion,sb/sth should …….

议论文的四个题型都可以用(同意与否、两方讨论、优缺对比、好或坏):
重复观点(+简单概括主体 )20字以内,

注意事项:

  • 不要无中生有 不写主体段没有的内容
  • 不写套话 不要升华 不提建议
  • 直接改写自己的观点即可

In conclusion/In summary/All in all/Overall/Above all/In a nutshell/To conclude/To sum up

一个真题

真题3:

2024.5.25同意与否——两者对比+抽象内容

It is impossible to help all people around the world in need, so governments should focus on helping people in their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Currently, citizens are disputing the issue of governmental charitable projects. Some maintain that instead of providing assistance to developing countries worldwide, authorities should give priority to native citizens. In my submission, public fund should be invested in ensuring the well-being of domestic residents out of government’s obligation(公共资金应出于政府的责任被用于保障本国居民的福祉)

主体段1150政府帮助本国人

For starters, authorities, especially for developing countries, should make efforts for their native residents in that people will be satisfied with their community and they can improve social equality.

中心句:重复题干+解释句:影响(好处)

It is widely accepted that public budget should be invested in infrastructure including medical service, educational resources and public welfare, which all consume a tremendous amount of funding. All these expenditures are contained within governmental daily operation, which are indispensable for the well-being of citizens domestically.
人们普遍认为,公共预算应投入于基础设施建设,包括医疗服务、教育资源和公共福利,这些项目无一不需要大量资金。所有这些支出都属于政府的日常运作范畴,是保障本国公民福祉所不可或缺的。

解释句:预告三个例子+原因

With advanced medical system related to public healthcare, medical facilities and professional doctors and nurses, local people will enjoy satisfying physical condition to make further contribution to their society.
借助涵盖公共医疗、医疗设施及专业医护人员的先进医疗体系,当地居民将享有良好的健康状况,从而能够进一步为社会作出贡献。

Moreover, when adequate educational resources are provided for the public, talented people will be cultivated to develop their own countries.
此外,当公众能够获得充分的教育资源时,社会将培养出更多人才,从而推动国家的发展。

There is no doubt that for disadvantaged people who suffer from poverty, governments can distribute various resources to promote their basic living standard including necessary shelter and average living expenses.

三个例子:医疗+教育+福利

Generally, there are a variety of aspects for local governments to invest in for domestic people, which indicates that for underdeveloped countries, they are unlikely to distribute extra resources for other countries.

总结句:改写中心句+引出下一段

本段结构:中心句+解释句+三个例子+总结句

主体段250政府不帮助别国的人

By contrast, when local governments possess limited resources in terms of financial reserves and lack of natural raw materials, they are highly unlikely to provide assistance to other countries in need.

中心句:重复题目+原因

If they insist on helping others, domestic resentment will be aroused. Not all the countries are developed sufficiently to fully take care of every citizen, which means there will be nations which endure domestic challenges like hunger, wars and unemployment.

解释句:影响——对人民的坏处

All in all, government leaders need to prioritize the well-being of their own residents.

总结句

In conclusion, governments should give priority to their native citizens and distribute public fund in various aspects to facilitate public daily life.

结尾段 

2025.5.17同意与否The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Currently, the public are discussing the topic of 公共媒体的内容。Some people think that 令人愉快的报道应该被宣传/被包含在不同的媒体中。In my perspective, 公众应该多接触积极的故事在日常生活中,尤其是更多的福利为了居民。

顺着同意 部分同意150 媒体报道好新闻50 好新闻的不足 报道坏新闻(天灾人祸)

因:正向的宣传 民众了解国家的发展 政府的政策

果:稳定的社会发展 人民踏实生活 安居乐业

例:内容2+影响2

科技进步(火箭 航天)——民族自豪
医疗突破(特效药 价格合理)医保便宜范围大——健康保障
公民福利(房屋租金 减税)——社会贡献
国家交往(外交 免签)——文化接触

第二段:好新闻的不足:公众的知情权 社会问题很多元化 政府信息不透明 不利于民众的监督

观点1:顺着题目的强烈对比

150 使用当地食物+使用当地建筑材料——环保

50从外地运送的缺点——环保

观点2:改成顺着题目的柔和对比

150 使用当地食物+建筑材料的好处——环保

50外地运送也有好处 但有不足——环保

使用当地食物的好处——环保

外地运送的坏处——环保

真题2:

Everyone should become a vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?

一定要包含所有限定词:我一开始只是提到古建筑和文化保护和促进经济,没有涉及“保护”,将古建筑替换为古建筑保护

也没有提到农村和城市,并且没有提到怎么保护,要添加保护的措施

最后改为城市不应该保护,农村没钱不该保护

城市人多

中心句

原因+结果

例1

例2

preserve=conserve=protect保存 保留 保护 动词

preservation=conservation=protection名词

restore=renovate=rebuild=redecorate=refurbish翻新 重建 修复 修缮 动词(记前4个)

restoration=renovation=rebuilding=redecoration=refurbishment名词

pay attention to=give priority to=focus on=concentrate on重视 

prioritize=value=emphasize=underline=underscore=highlight在乎

meaning=significance=value=importance意义

old=ancient=previous老的 旧的

buildings=facilities=structures=establishments建筑物(地图)

feature=trait(物品)=qualities=characteristics=personality

=attribute性格(人)

heritage传承=inheritance

relics遗址

Be banned = be restricted = be prohibited 被禁止

infrastructure 基础设施

organised 组织好的(形容物),有条理的(形容人)

例子举什么,当然是举支持你自己观点的例子,你观点是不应该播放犯罪细节,因为会让民众模仿,那例子就举电视台播放(电视也是题目要求的)这类画面时会打马赛克,这样就能使群众避免接触到非必要的负面信息,给社会带来好的影响(社会是题目要求的)

The only reason for people working hard is to earnmoney. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

顺着说不会跑题,就说努力工作就是为了钱。但是反驳很容易跑题,只能反驳working hard和earn money。不能说努力工作是为了其他东西,因为题目中没有说,只能提挣钱为目的来上班会有不足:比如功利性太强,太累

High-level computer skills are a necessary and important factor leading to a successful career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?这个题目也是,反驳不能跑题,不能说因为还需要其他技能

对比的题目

新题型:

大作文的主体段:就两种

• 100+100:两方讨论的中立 常用

• 150+50:两方讨论的赞同某一个观点 两个观点都要说

 两方讨论:互相对立

• 中立 100正 100反

• 赞同正方 150正方 50反方

赞同反方 150反方 50正方

独立和对立不重要,只要都赞同或都反对即可

我选择中立,找传统和自由的好处。各找2个点即可,否则一个要找3个,一个要找一个

这个是独立,A=b,A=c,不是对立A不等于B,A等于b

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